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pixiewithpens's avatar

"the earth tilts to its fresh desire" and "footsteps melt back into the underbrush" are my two favourite lines, so good!!!!! tilt and melt are two excellent verbs and they have that nice sound similarity too (i forget the technical term, my brain is in hibernation, but you get me)

Nelly Bryce's avatar

Thanks so much for the mention. Hope you have a marvellous poetry filled next few weeks ❤️

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